My 1 Sphere The Geosphere DRAFT

Today you will be reading about my sphere that I have chosen to write about the Geosphere I have chosen to write about the geosphere because I think that the geosphere is something that we all need to know about and because I think that this is what I know abou the most 

Geosphere:
The Geosphere is a sphere that has all the non living things in it like rocks, minerals,molten,sand and mountains there are greek word for Geo,Atmo,Bio and Hydro But the greek word for Geo is Ground . In the Geosphere their are 4 layers underneath the earth surface they are the 4 layers they are called    

persuasive Writing

My Metaphors writing

The snow is a white blanket.

The hospital was a refrigerator.

The classroom was a zoo.

Her lovely voice was music to his ears.

Life is  a roller coaster.

The alligator’s teeth are white daggers.

Their home was a prison.

The slide on the playground was a hot stove.

His heart is a cold iron.

She is a peacock.

He is a shining star.

Time is money.

My teacher is a dragon.

Tom’s eyes were ice

The detective’s face was wood as he listened to her story.

She feels that life is a fashion show

My kid’s room is a disaster area.

The children were flowers grown in concrete gardens.

His words were cotton candy.

Mary’s eyes were fireflies.

Jane’s ambitions are a house of cards.

Her long hair was a flowing golden river.

The computers at school were dinosaurs.

Laughter is the music of the soul.

 He is a night owl.

The computers at school were dinosaurs as they were getting older and older and then as I got off them because they were breaking but as I walked pass Blake wow His words were cotton candy. They were so nice. And friendly My teacher is a dragon when I walked into the net room all I see is flames coming from her ears  

 

My goals

Goals for Student Led Conference
Name: Aroha		Maths Teacher : Mrs Mcleod
Writing	My goal for writing is to improve the vocabulary in my writing.	I will achieve this by using my phonics knowledge to spell words I’m not sure of and use more descriptive language.
Reading	My goal for reading is to improve my vocabulary so that I know what different words mean.	I will achieve this by finding the meaning of words I’m not sure of and then making sure I use them in my writing so I remember them.
Maths	My goal for maths is	I will achieve this by:
My Hero Goal	I need to choose a great attitude to my work, so I can get better and move on to the next stage in my learning. Then I can help others when I have achieved that goal.
Something I want to share:

this is my goals in reading and wriying

In The Trenches

Dead bodies rotting all around. People sprinting from the reek of flesh.  Sometimes I wonder why the flesh is rotting and noone will do anything about it?

Sandbags spilling to their death. They are spilling like a blizzard. All the rivals are shooting the sandbags. I wonder why they are trying to kill the person behind the sandbag?

Lice making people itchy. Launching from the dirt into the clothing of the soldiers. I wonder how they get there so fast?

Rats eating flesh from dead people's bodies because they don't have anything to eat. I wonder why they eat flesh? Its like dead people eating rats.