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Monday 19 November 2018

Passion Project's

Hello , For kete this term we are doing this thing called passion projects there are many options to choose from the one that i'm doing is community sports , for this me and the rest of my group have decide to do netball so far during this I have learnt that It is not easy to organize such a big thing together we will get through this by working together and trying our best our next step is to wait for the principal from Hornby primary school     

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Aroha - nice to see your first blog up there. Can you do the one Ms Clements went through on Monday which tells everyone where you and your group are up to?

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  2. Hey Aroha, it's Milan. Your blog was nice but there were some mistakes. While i was reading most of the sentences didn't make sense, like when you said " for this me and the rest of my group have decide to do netball so far during this I have learnt that It is not easy to organise". Next time you post make sure you introduce yourself, read through the post, get someone to edit it so it can be better and check your spelling. Everything else was good.

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