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Thursday, 11 May 2017

Movies - DRAFT

DRAFT
Who - Mum,Dad,Tamani,Zalena,Durrell,Aunty Mara,Me
What - went to the Movie to see Fate of Furious 8
When - Sunday the last day of the Holiday
Why - wanted to go to see something
How - I went with My Aunty
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It was Sunday Night we were on our way to the movies I was sitting in the car wondering what the movie would be like if it would have a bit of comedy in it or Action Oh well I guess I would just have to wait and see. We were about five minutes away from the riccarton movie theaters My whole family was in My mum and dad’s car I was with my Aunty in her Car we got there before them and then they got their But before they got their we saw my brother friend  and they were going to see Guardians of the Galaxy 2. When the rest of my family got to the Movies My  brothers Friend has just gone into see his movie that they wear going to see. We were in line for about 5 or 6 minutes and then we were at the front of the line . We as in me and my Other Sibling were at the front of the counter with my Mum Dad and Aunty Mara and then my Dad said that we had to go away so that their was enough room for them three to fit. We were waiting for ages it was like waiting  at a Justin Bieber Concert. When Mum and Dad finished getting the tickets we still had to wait for a while because my Aunty was still buying hers and my sisters tickets but that didn't take as long because she was only buying for two people. We finally got into the waiting line and the we had to wait for even longer because theater 2 as getting cleaned we waited for five minutes while I  was waiting I was playing in the photo booth and then when I was finished doodling around it was time to go I was unhappy because the line was really long but before we go there it short  

1 comment:

  1. Woah, did you really go to the big screen? I haven't go there before, your lucky. You need ,kama, highlights, and descriptive words. I really like that you put your plan.

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